The Unfaithful Lover

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Part 1 - Flitting Love

Would thee be happy to know I love thee,
Oh my dearest rose.. would thee,
I seek not thine's love,
I seek only to profess my love,

My divine devotion to thee,
Can it be compared to a summer breeze?
Flitting, from time to time,
Yet there for all time...

Part 2 - Egoistic Man

Should I be in thee's heart
For I seek not thy's heart
As sure as I love thee
I would not be thee's

For I cannot devote myself to one
Thus I cannot be thine's
It would do grave injustice,
To all the women who craves me.

Note: This poem is done as an intentional pun for my friends... tongue you know who u are... the 1st part is for a friend who happily seeks love of others... then 2nd part is for a friend that has too many "peminat" ahahahah... no hard feelings ok happy

Note2: This poem has been edited, to better the theme and such... If you have read it before.. try looking for the changes

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applause
nice poem.. hehe.. more poem pls.. big grin

salam,
i notice the pun. a good one brother. hope to hear more from you. i've kind of landed myself in a mind freeze. all the best. happy.

amran

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